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Why kittens are the best!

I’ll be telling you why kittens are the absolute best pet. This includes if you would want one or not, and if cats are the right pet for you! I’ll list some breeds of cat and see if you like any one of them. The cats go from the Abyssinian to the Somali. All the cats lovable!! Remember this when picking a cat, some cats may be skittish (scared) and some may be vicious! But if you treat them with respect from the start you’ll come up with one beautiful cat in the end!

The breeds: They are many breeds of cats these days, many…, but remember these; The Abyssinian: These intelligent cats, their roots are still a mystery… The Abyssinian’s sphinx-like appearances seem to give people the idea that they are related to the sphinx, a hairless cat that was loyal to the Egyptians. Some trace their breed as far back to as the Abyssinian war, or to India. Nevertheless this intelligent cat is a loyal loving companion to many. The American Shorthair: This cat is the most common of the breeds, and one of the most loved. They are said to be brought on a journey on the mayflower. These breeds have a long and happy life with us, if we treat them with respect. It was brought here because the pioneers thought the land might have been rats amongst them!! This little cat was designed to kill those little squeakers’!! Although they were designed to kill, they still have an affectionate loving side too. So take this little cat in and give him warmth! The Himalayan: This little cat was born from a cross from a Persian and a Siamese cat. This cat was a great success!! It has the beauty of a Persian and the kindness and warmth of a Siamese (Not to mention it social abilities.). A long coat, a nice tail, and a colorful personality!!! Makes you want to yodel for one now doesn’t it?! The Maine coon: The second favorite cat of Americans, named after its ‘raccoon’ appearance. Although this is a very lovable cat, it doesn’t mean you would want them to jump on to your lap every minute since they weigh twice as much than the average cat does. It just a huge playful kitten!! It’s nothing a new cat person can’t handle! This brightening enthusiastic cat will light up your day with it warm touch and worry free type of attitude. It’ll almost like its saying “Have a great day!” The Persian: This English cat is a cat fit for a king! With its proud heritage, shouting its pride with meows, it’s no wonder it would be adored! You’d probably think this cat with long fur, stubby legs, and strong bones would make it a bit of a dog, right? Wrong! This cat is a calmly beautiful cat is a wonder to the English! In fact, this cat is British royalty! Its long flowing beautiful coat made its treasure stay golden! The joy that may just make your everyday life, less stressful is yours to keep in your arms!

All cats’, weather their big, tall, or short are all part of a glorious pride in our lives. Some upsides I must mention: Cats are playful. They can play with you all day and not get tired. String is great with them. Or just anything you can drag around, but be careful not to leave any wires out, you know the saying: curiosity killed the cat!!!!

If you’re looking for a pet that easy to take care of, it’s the cat! It cleanses itself by the minute! It sleeps most of the day, and it only eats 3 times a day! And it will reward you if you reward them! Their love by some in unsurpassable by anything! Just try to resist the cat that you might just fall in love with and you’ll look back at least a half-second later!

If you’re a person that wants a pet that is totally dependent on you, then the dog is for you. The cat is an independent individual, capable of knocking over the fishbowl, jumping off the second floor, or leaping to safety in a last ditch effort to escape the family dog! I’m not saying that the dog isn’t good; I’m just saying that I prefer cats over dogs. In conclusion the cat is the pet for a hard worker or a calming vacationer. Either way, the cat is the best pet!

This post has been edited by Saint_Jimmy: Feb 9 2008, 04:06 PM

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[hammerman25]

The first sentence should be deleted and the thier should be they're.

[sheep01]

Nice essay. Although you forgot my favorite breed, Devon Rex.

[Tikuiaku]

There are a few grammar errors here and there (I can point some out if you'd like), but overall, it's a pretty good essay. Of course, it all depends on the requirement, hehe.